Just read your query, Colene, and I thought it was great! Your opening hook is awesome. I think Matthew had some great suggestions for you, but the query looks pretty good. It makes me want to read your novel for sure!
Loved your query, Colene! Can't think of anything to add... you're pretty much right where you need to be! The books sounds amazing.
Awesome query, Colene. I've got my fingers crossed for you. Good luck. =o)
I also liked your query. Good luck!
Hi Colene, gad you are back. I missed your comments over at mine :O)
Just got back from reading query.. it's very good, and I love your story idea! Wish you all the best! :)
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