tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post949793250847922737..comments2024-02-16T04:49:55.981-06:00Comments on Colene Murphy: Check Out My Thing : The Writers Voice Entry #171Colene Murphyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-40477028620637299392012-06-01T20:28:02.267-05:002012-06-01T20:28:02.267-05:00Wonderful! It's so fun to see your writing. ...Wonderful! It's so fun to see your writing. I don't know how the Writer's Voice thingy all turned out. I caught glimpses of it on Twitter. I haven't been around the blogosphere much. Hope you had a great experience with it! Congrats to you! christyerica and christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-2500217264857440992012-05-28T14:13:36.489-05:002012-05-28T14:13:36.489-05:00Okay, the first line of your query completely suck...Okay, the first line of your query completely sucked me in. Great job. I just found your blog - look forward to following :)Tasha Seegmillerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11489911822054861132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-13042801331924514922012-05-15T20:29:57.574-05:002012-05-15T20:29:57.574-05:00wow that sounds really interesting! i actually til...wow that sounds really interesting! i actually tilted my head to the side like a dog when i was reading your query blurb LOL.Kristin Raehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14169967050454852124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-4759324948841815352012-05-15T19:19:56.090-05:002012-05-15T19:19:56.090-05:00Ack, I'm late to the party, but great job here...Ack, I'm late to the party, but great job here, Colene! Loved both the query and the excerpt. Seriously good stuff.Jennifer Hillierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15783975547643539868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-56047536573651596192012-05-09T21:46:40.819-05:002012-05-09T21:46:40.819-05:00I really like this one!! Good luck!I really like this one!! Good luck!Ambiguous_Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14401920531742299549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-8910615751781041882012-05-09T12:27:08.135-05:002012-05-09T12:27:08.135-05:00Very cool! Good luck. Nice excerpt too!Very cool! Good luck. Nice excerpt too!Southpawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16539290964546504171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-31018616123590348442012-05-08T18:03:45.092-05:002012-05-08T18:03:45.092-05:00Oo, a descendant of Death. Nice! :) Good luck!Oo, a descendant of Death. Nice! :) Good luck!Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-88311645340172227922012-05-07T17:10:03.071-05:002012-05-07T17:10:03.071-05:00She wouldn't be able to steal my soul because ...She wouldn't be able to steal my soul because Dorian and I gave our souls to the Devil. Mwuhahahaah. Very scary.<br /><br />Good luck with your entry >:)<br /><br /><a href="http://cold-as-heaven.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Cold As Heaven</a>CA Heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07558100567878233142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-19877260832383601562012-05-07T12:18:52.467-05:002012-05-07T12:18:52.467-05:00Great query and excerpt!! I love the premise - lot...Great query and excerpt!! I love the premise - lots of promise here. Good luck!alexiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07122487552931794871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-30791306078028311512012-05-07T10:48:20.179-05:002012-05-07T10:48:20.179-05:00ooo--great tension!!! I beet you do awesome. Keep ...ooo--great tension!!! I beet you do awesome. Keep us posted, and GOOD LUCK!!! :o) <3LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-60222866548037292532012-05-06T23:46:01.807-05:002012-05-06T23:46:01.807-05:00Love the premise. Good luck!!Love the premise. Good luck!!Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-60941762271858148242012-05-06T22:36:16.410-05:002012-05-06T22:36:16.410-05:00Give me a sister yarn with fantastical elements an...Give me a sister yarn with fantastical elements and I'm a total sucker. Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-40298597137240738932012-05-06T15:48:07.296-05:002012-05-06T15:48:07.296-05:00Interesting premise! Good luck from #70!Interesting premise! Good luck from #70!Dahlia Adlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02265012593385220677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-72118958219705055462012-05-06T15:30:36.046-05:002012-05-06T15:30:36.046-05:00Love the premise!!
Good luck in the contest!
Sum...Love the premise!!<br /><br />Good luck in the contest!<br /><br />Summer - #40Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17193294741781407749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-44463143301060799592012-05-06T14:37:56.927-05:002012-05-06T14:37:56.927-05:00COLE! You made the list?!?! Congrats! I've nev...COLE! You made the list?!?! Congrats! I've never seen a linky list fill up so fast in all my years of blogging. So this is very exciting.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-49243424518520877492012-05-06T14:18:33.421-05:002012-05-06T14:18:33.421-05:00I guess I am neither "every writer" nor ...I guess I am neither "every writer" nor "their mamma" 'cause I totally missed this Writers Voice thing! And that seems like an intriguing and well-written query. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06181241692016438730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-38556960979538083052012-05-05T23:50:25.793-05:002012-05-05T23:50:25.793-05:00Wow, this sounds awesome! I would totally pick it ...Wow, this sounds awesome! I would totally pick it up and read it! Good luck to you!!! :DCortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-50794631440100231642012-05-05T23:11:14.079-05:002012-05-05T23:11:14.079-05:00Enjoyed reading your entry, and I love the name Da...Enjoyed reading your entry, and I love the name Damaris! Best of luck :-)<br /><br />Ashley #78Ashley Makerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13760353417553975473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-61177921805546924722012-05-05T19:03:48.327-05:002012-05-05T19:03:48.327-05:00Damaris sounds like an interesting character. I wo...Damaris sounds like an interesting character. I would like to read more about what happens to her. Good luck in the contest!Danielle Nauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11965306117164180445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-23245836850768164762012-05-05T16:34:16.346-05:002012-05-05T16:34:16.346-05:00I love the opening - it grabbed my attention immed...I love the opening - it grabbed my attention immediately - how on earth can you be a direct descendant of death? Or maybe its not on earth - but somewhere deep beneath it? Good luck.!C.G.Aylinghttp://cgayling.com/malmaxa/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-24578327465930734592012-05-05T15:35:10.292-05:002012-05-05T15:35:10.292-05:00My comment is gone! Weird. Anywho, love it as al...My comment is gone! Weird. Anywho, love it as always, crit-partner-of-mine! I get to brag that I've read the whole thing already ;pAbby Minardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963640263845561309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-42323335309309895222012-05-05T12:36:53.456-05:002012-05-05T12:36:53.456-05:00Good luck, love Death in a story always! -April, #...Good luck, love Death in a story always! -April, #61April Wallhttp://aewelch.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-27885855585602680782012-05-04T20:20:03.191-05:002012-05-04T20:20:03.191-05:00This sounds awesome! Good luck with the contest!
...This sounds awesome! Good luck with the contest!<br /><br />Kelsey -#186KelsNotChelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08589509934771708353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-70384228500693930262012-05-04T16:44:41.595-05:002012-05-04T16:44:41.595-05:00Daughter of Death! Wow! Good luck! :)Daughter of Death! Wow! Good luck! :)Carolyn Abiadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10567399129586443513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1751167979012161263.post-41740527993514494702012-05-04T11:26:01.388-05:002012-05-04T11:26:01.388-05:00Good luck and congrats!Good luck and congrats!Johanna Garthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15515478890074610814noreply@blogger.com